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Natalian

Post by Guest on Sun Aug 22, 2010 3:12 am

Here is my potion poem!

Integrity

Im not a pretty person
Im not your perfect girl
You say that I’m strange
A piece of ugly shame

You laugh me in the face
Dragging in my soul
Screaming I’m useless
Another piece of shit

I tell you I’m happy
I tell you don’t care
Don’t judge the way I’m

I know that I’m not useless
I’m better than you say
But you can’t understand
Cause you’re stuck at your pointless way

Don’t care if you don’t like it
It’s me and my free will
Nothing you can do about it
Say or ever change

Keep tell me I’m not perfect
How ugly you think I’m
Yes please keep wasting time
You can never change me
I’m one of a kind

Integrity is my protection
It’s my given right
Your word just doesn’t matter
I’m free to live my life
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Post by Krissy on Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:38 am

nice

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Post by Guest on Sun Aug 22, 2010 12:11 pm

tnx ^.^

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Post by Krissy on Sun Aug 22, 2010 12:16 pm

Natalian wrote:tnx ^.^

you're welcome

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Post by YetiMoonchild on Sun Aug 22, 2010 1:44 pm

YOU LIVE IN SWEDEN???????? :DDDDDD Sorry^^'
I loved your poem, it was beautiful Very Happy
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Re: Natalian

Post by Guest on Sun Aug 22, 2010 1:47 pm

Haha yes i do! Very Happy

Thank you sweetie =^.^=

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Post by YetiMoonchild on Sun Aug 22, 2010 1:58 pm

Cool : D ^^
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Post by Guest on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:34 am

beautiful country sweden!!!!

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Post by Guest on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:35 am

This is the best one i've read so far..deep meaning...very awesome!!!

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Post by Guest on Mon Aug 23, 2010 10:49 am

beautiful_inside20 wrote:This is the best one i've read so far..deep meaning...very awesome!!!


Thank you SO much! Makes me really happy =^.^=

And yes Sweden is beautiful, in the north parts :3

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Post by pixiedust19 on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:47 pm

beautiful! <3 it. Very Happy

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Post by PROUDLIKECOW on Mon Aug 23, 2010 8:36 pm

I like how you've individualized integrity making it easy to understand. Your potion is great!
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Post by Guest on Tue Aug 24, 2010 6:12 am

pixiedust19 wrote:beautiful! <3 it. Very Happy

Thank you dear glad you liked it ^^ <3



PROUDLIKECOW wrote:I like how you've individualized integrity making it easy to understand. Your potion is great!


Thank you! I thought integrity was hard to understand myslef so thats why i made it pretty simple. Happy you liked it! (:

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Post by Krissy on Wed Aug 25, 2010 6:44 am

I did't really understand it myself......That's why i did't pick this one.

Ya hope you win.

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Post by Guest on Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:59 am

hope u win...good one..amazing..

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Re: Natalian

Post by Guest on Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:30 pm

Thanks a LOT! <3

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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 on Fri Aug 27, 2010 11:10 pm

Integrity is like the hardest one to do and you pulled it off so perfectly! I love it Smile it makes Integrity feel so much more personal and unique for each individual.

good luck I love you
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Post by Guest on Sun Aug 29, 2010 12:10 pm

God luck to you to! ^_^ <3

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Re: Natalian

Post by Nânâ on Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:29 am

I think you have good chances to win =)
it was great =O
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Post by Krissy on Wed Sep 08, 2010 5:33 am

goodluck

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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:39 pm

love it Smile
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Post by TheBlueJayStar on Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:07 pm

woah! you could win!
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Re: Natalian

Post by Guest on Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:10 am

Thank you very much!

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Re: Natalian

Post by Natt on Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:25 pm

I like it, interesting
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