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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:55 pm

Notes: Okay, This took me about 8 hours to finish editing. It also took another 30 minutes to find the right words. :-P. So yes, I worked hard on this. Please leave nice comments(:
PS I suck at poems.
PPS I'm only 12 so be nice.

Ignorant, impatient and awkward,
Those are my flaws.
I am not beautiful,
A face I do not have.
You say I am strange,
That you want to fix who I am.
I am everything you loath,
Everything you pushed out of your life.
You hate what I am,
To you I am oblivion.

You hide what I am away from the world,
I don't fit your perfect image.
I cover my face with deception,
My essence of perfection is but a mask.
A thick layer of lunacy that is bleak,
What have you made me?

I am a servant of God,
A sinner, a lover, and a worshiper.
What I am is what I was born to be,
I am a perfect child of God.
I serve,
Because I am thankful.

I have become what you expected me to be,
A monster.
You will no longer change me,
You will not touch my fragile heart.
My identity...
My INTEGRITY.


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Post by pixiedust19 on Thu Aug 19, 2010 11:17 pm

IgnorantSmiles wrote:PS I suck at poems.
u do not! xD this poem is great!! u did an awesome job(:

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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Thu Aug 19, 2010 11:47 pm

why thank you :3
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Post by Claudia on Thu Aug 19, 2010 11:58 pm

This is amazing!

Wow, must be hard work.
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Post by Guest on Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:40 am

This reminds me of the song strange..Very good

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Post by PROUDLIKECOW on Fri Aug 20, 2010 8:58 am

Maybe your other poems suck, but not this one! This poem was well-written. You did not labor in vain, you should know it's worth every moment you gave it! I think everyone can relate to its message. Excellent!
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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:45 pm

Thank you everyone!
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Post by Natt on Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:04 pm

amazing
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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:15 pm

Thank you :]
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Post by Natt on Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:17 pm

You're welcome Smile
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Post by Krissy on Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:31 pm

very good

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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:40 pm

Thank you. It means so much Smile
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Post by Gretta on Sat Aug 21, 2010 4:09 am

I love it! Very Happy

and I see i'm not the only one who noticed that this sounds alike to "strange" Very Happy
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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:20 pm

Aww thank you :]
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Post by Guest on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:33 am

very emotional...goood work

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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Mon Aug 23, 2010 4:16 pm

Thank you Smile
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Post by Krissy on Wed Aug 25, 2010 6:51 am

GoodLuck to you.

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Post by Guest on Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:56 am

wow..So good..Hope you win.

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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:32 pm

Thank you. It means so much.
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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 on Fri Aug 27, 2010 11:16 pm

oh my gosh it's so beautiful!!!!!!!!! GOOD LUCK Very Happy
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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:40 am

Aww thank you :]
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Post by cg360 on Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:20 pm

pixiedust19 wrote:
IgnorantSmiles wrote:PS I suck at poems.
u do not! xD this poem is great!! u did an awesome job(:

Nope, you definitely do not suck! Keep it up!! Smile

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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:36 pm

Aww thank you :]
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Post by cg360 on Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:39 pm

IgnorantSmiles wrote:Aww thank you :]

Smile

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Post by Nânâ on Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:33 am

Such a great poem with 12??? O_O
wow
WOW
WOHOOOOOOOOW
very nice =)
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Post by Krissy on Wed Sep 08, 2010 5:32 am

goodluck

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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Wed Sep 08, 2010 8:14 pm

Thank you all or your wonderful comments and support. I really appreciate it. Winning would mean THE WORLD TO ME. Kerli is my inspiration and the reason that I'm here. Smile
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Thu Sep 09, 2010 3:32 am

amazing goodluck :Dits so well-writtren i want to read it again Very Happy
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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:34 am

That means the world to me :]
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Post by TheBlueJayStar on Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:01 pm

woah. this is really emotional.
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:02 pm

Smile yw


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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:34 am

Is that a good thing? haha
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:37 am

yeah of course it is!!!
all peoms and songs should be emotional...or at least fun to listen to x.0
but i love it!!
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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Sat Sep 11, 2010 12:41 pm

Haha okay. Thank you <3
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 12:43 pm

no problem Very Happy always trying to help
*noms on a candy cane*
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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:47 pm

Haha.
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