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Post by PROUDLIKECOW on Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:38 pm

I was particularly meticulous in my word-choice here, more so than usual. I borrowed from some of my other unfinished works as well, with appropriate modifications of course. I honestly think this is the best poem I've ever created! Then again, I haven't written much... Meaning should always outweigh your structuring scheme. But riddles sound cooler when they rhyme in time! Wow, I just (dictionary.com)ed "riddle" and the quotes at the bottom are AMAZING!
Anyways, here's my poem. I hope it casts inspiration on y'all to concoct even more bewildering potions!


-Integrity-

Our soil thus boils over sins within:

Corrupted, inducted are weeds whose needs
extract death's pact that writhes upon lies.
Its voided measure embroiders pleasure with
scouring powers, allowing cowards' devouring.

Share its tare or bear our care!
Cull its wool to dull lust's pull
as rust-laid trust decays away.

Plant grain seeds you mean to grow!
Uproot bane deeds unduly honed!
Gleaned by snow towards checkered rows
bones fall against stone wall's renown.

Invest your best at rest lets tests
of hues if true, imbues unto
the glow once sown, now known is shone!

This meal from steel dost heal my zeal,
drives out chives whom bend in winds
which bind fools blind; then yearns to burn.

Set apart God's breast-earned hearts
the holy wife endured in strife
as purpose-driven worth, when given.

Through those ears' we're always heard
so breathe firm might into every word.
Life's hard, at first. We've sold our girth
and guard pains' worst for bold new birth!


Last edited by PROUDLIKECOW on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:36 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : changed who's to whose. I know, "it's NOT about perfect English" but I just had to...)
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Post by IgnorantSmiles on Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:10 pm

I love it :3
Good luck love.
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Post by PROUDLIKECOW on Fri Aug 20, 2010 8:59 am

Thank you!
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Post by Krissy on Fri Aug 20, 2010 10:06 am

wow! that's very awesome and pretty..good job.

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Post by Natt on Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:12 pm

awesome
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Post by omarkerlifan on Sat Aug 21, 2010 3:01 pm

Awesome! Razz
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Post by electric_rhino on Sat Aug 21, 2010 3:03 pm

very nice. I like it.
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Post by Guest on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:40 am

like it very much!!!!

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Post by PROUDLIKECOW on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:39 pm

I'm glad y'all like it and think it's awesome. I do too. You could say I'm "proud" Rolling Eyes
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Post by Krissy on Wed Aug 25, 2010 6:49 am

nothing wrong with being proud

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Post by Guest on Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:57 am

Amazing..Good luck to you..Hope you win..

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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 on Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:35 pm

o_O WOW!!!!

I'm speechless.. which is quite rare..

<3 good luck! i hope you win too Smile
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Post by PROUDLIKECOW on Thu Sep 02, 2010 10:00 pm

Totally depends on why you're proud, and what for!
Thanks y'all!!
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Tue Sep 07, 2010 2:23 pm

wow Shocked good luck im making a poem im still thinking..but i wish you luck..Smile
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Post by TheBlueJayStar on Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:03 pm

woah. you can tell this had a lot put into it.
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