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Summer Woes and Wows

Post by lunachild on Wed Jun 05, 2013 11:49 am

Here is where I'm basically recording my summer in poem... depending on what happens that is.

Another Summer Where
I'm alone... completely alone.

There is not another soul in the high school other than the teachers just packing up

I'm alone... completely alone.

I sit here and write this by myself and think of the summer vacation to come

I'm alone... completely alone.

They are having a party tonight and They did not invite me

I'm alone... completely alone.

My "friends" are going along with almost every one in my class I know

I'm alone... completely alone.

Why didn't they invite me? I'll never know

I'm alone... completely alone.

Am I that friendless that no one would think to invite me?

I'm alone... completely alone.

Do they even care the ones that call themselves my friends?

I'm alone... completely alone.

Maybe I am just some dumb loser no one at this small school likes

I'm alone... completely alone.

This summer might just end up like all of the others

I'm alone... completely alone.

Another summer where there is no one but me

Another summer where I'm alone... completely alone
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Re: Summer Woes and Wows

Post by stargirlstrike on Thu Jun 06, 2013 12:15 pm

I'm sorry that you're feeling alone right now =/ the moonchildren are here for you! But I love your repetition and your idea to go through your summer in poems. It kinda makes me want to do it myself Smile
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Post by lunachild on Thu Jun 06, 2013 3:37 pm

Thank you. That makes me feel a little better that someone likes it.

Something To Do Without You
For once I have exciting news

It has been quite a while

If only someone other than family cared

I want an unfamiliar smile

No one responds to my texts

Or face book chats

It hurts so much to be all alone

I'd rather they beat me with bats

At least I have something to do

Somewhere new to go

And I wont have to see any of you there

Maybe I'll make a friend I don't know

Then I can post it

Say it loud for all to hear

I have something to do with out you

I don't need you, if that wasn't clear


Maybe that one is spot on... who knows?
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