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Post by lunachild on Thu Apr 18, 2013 1:45 pm

I'm not who anyone wants me to be.
They're always trying to change me,
To fix me into someone I'm
Clearly not. So why do they even
Try to fix me? I have no idea why
They even bother. I'm not really
Worth their time or worry.
They might as well give up now.
Don't try to fix me...
Why am I broken?
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Re: Fix Me

Post by stargirlstrike on Mon Apr 22, 2013 11:31 am

This is a great poem... sad, but very well done. I especially like the last two lines...
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Re: Fix Me

Post by lunachild on Wed May 15, 2013 4:07 am

Thank you Smile I was kind of sad that day, so... I'm glad you like it
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