Ode Against Me, song

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Ode Against Me, song

Post by jeanmeneghelli on Wed Mar 06, 2013 4:48 pm

Ode Against Me

"I'm such a fool and you can't love me
A black hole in the deep sea
A burning sunburst in your sunglass
I am a flame in your hair

A headache shaking your hands
An angry bear hugging you
I'm just a knife against the skin
I am a shark coming to eat you

I am a deaf bat at night
Cause your love make blind
And all I can hear is your voice
Killing me day by day

I am a clown of sadness
A boat on a waterfall
I'm an arrow on fire
Running away into the wild life

I will love you but you can't love me
I won't love you if you love me
I will break you into a million pieces
You won't regret
When I shot you dead."

I wrote it about the feeling I had when somebody fall in love with me.
Hope you guys like it.

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Re: Ode Against Me, song

Post by kailen on Wed Mar 06, 2013 7:30 pm

Good poem many nice lines
Love is always a comprise I guess
Nicely wrote

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