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UpUpUp's Poems and Songs

Post by Up♥Up♥Up on Wed Mar 06, 2013 12:23 am

This is my first poem, entitled Evelyn. I hope you like it! After you've finished reading it, read the first letter of each verse for a clearer meaning. Smile


Evelyn

After all of the icicles have melted like tears
Columns of lightning rise up in psychosis
After all of the fog of days past has cleared
Columns, spirals, the brain's tools for hypnosis

Often a stumble, sometimes a trip
Paths branching out from hearts and from lungs
Halfway a stumble, always a trip
Origins from psychedelics and drugs

Never unhappy, apathy is the best
Inches of cardboard slide up past her thighs
Constantly happy, never depressed
Excited by twitches tucked under her lies

Xenophobic suburbs packed like sardines
Impish hummers constantly drive past scenery
Soldiers filter tentatively into latrines
Two-towered forests, black with greenery

Elevated spirits, minds, and branches
Non-stop barrage of pills and euphoria
Catalysts of ecstasy, thought avalanches
Evelyn smiles, for they all scream "Gloria!"
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Post by Up♥Up♥Up on Wed Mar 06, 2013 1:12 am

This is a song I wrote recently, entitled Padlý, which means "Fallen".

Padlý

Nevadi mi kam spadnu
Kdyz padam jsem v nebi
Nevadi mi kam spadnu
Mam vsechny me potreby

A i kdyz padnu do pekla
Ja se vubec nebojim
A i kdyz padnu do cerno
Ja se vubec nebojim

Nevadi mi kam lezime
At jsme spolu vzdy
Nevadi mi kam milujeme
At je tam ja a ty

A i kdyz litam do pekla
Ja se vubec nebojim
A i kdyz litam do cerno
Ja se vubec nebojim

Ty padly maji radosti
Ty padly mi davaji dech
Ty padly maji radosti
Ty padly mi davaji dech

A i kdyz litam do nebi
Ja se vubec nebojim
A i kdyz padam do bily
Ja se vubec nebojim



Fallen

I don't care where I fall
For it is bliss as I'm falling
I don't care where I fall
For I have all that I need

And even if I fall into hell
I will not be scared
And even if I fall into black
I will not be scared

I don't care where we rest
As long as you're with me
I don't care where we make love
As long as it's just you and me

And even if I fly into hell
I will not be scared
And even if I fly into black
I will not be scared

The Fallen should be joyful
The Fallen give me breath
The Fallen should be joyful
The Fallen give me breath

And even if I fly into heaven
I will not be scared
And even if I fall into white
I will not be scared


It's not perfect, because my czech isn't all that great due to the fact that I only attended the first three grades of school in czech, and after that I was transferred to an english-speaking boarding school. I still try to use my czech as often as possible though, hence this song. Smile
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Post by Up♥Up♥Up on Wed Mar 06, 2013 1:35 am

Here's a song I wrote called Pandora, about a woman, who was never good enough for the man she loved.

Pandora

Sacks of skin filled up with my being
All this blood and muscle and a heart that's beating
Like an angry father punishing a child
Pupils follow others, crimson and beguiled

Affection drips, it drips so saccharine
Pouring onto a photo, a glossy square of sheen
In it can be seen another of the same species
Just another human, one that always says she's

Trouble in a box, Illness in a wrapper
As he begins to talk, She becomes a snapper
Snapping up the other woman's vitality
Another reminder of our morality

Constant cacophony of the mind
A twisted female half-lovestruck, half-blind
To the social requirements of simply existing
This pressing pressure just keeps persisting

He's the one, the diamond, well, not quite, but still
She wants him, no, needs him, so twisted and ill
The woman, the other, the one always getting in the way
She's gotta pay

Trouble in a box, Illness in a wrapper
As he begins to talk, She becomes a snapper
Snapping up the other woman's vitality
Another reminder of our morality

Psychotic mess, a cautionary tale
Society's woman, a product gone stale
Neurotic bitch, a killer and a liar
A sobbing creature, one who starts the fires
Depressive lovers, crying as they make love
Obsessive children, something to let go of
Diseased organs simply writhing in a fashion
That reminds one of a fleeting night of passion

It's enough, it's got to be enough
She's got to be enough
She'll do anything for love

As she steps onto the scale that she so fears
One Zero Four, she collapses as all her tears
Stream down her face, ribcage piercing the tissue
Of a woman that she thinks that she once knew

Goodnight, darling
Wherever you are...


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Re: UpUpUp's Poems and Songs

Post by kailen on Wed Mar 06, 2013 7:44 pm

You definitely have got talent so don't burn it up
references too abortion or a mistake? Social sigmas In last poem
Unsure but great reads



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Re: UpUpUp's Poems and Songs

Post by Up♥Up♥Up on Thu Mar 07, 2013 12:23 pm

Thank you very much! Very Happy
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Re: UpUpUp's Poems and Songs

Post by kailen on Fri Mar 08, 2013 2:10 pm

No thankyou bounce keep smiling
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