this is about addiction. i couldn't finish it cos i was crying

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this is about addiction. i couldn't finish it cos i was crying

Post by infinitereality on Tue Aug 21, 2012 3:05 am

I AM THE OBSERVER

We Are But Mirrors of One Another
Not From This Earth
Unfold The Blossoming
Overflowing with Light
Expanding Dimensions
cylindrical
spiked vortex
otherworldly killing machine
healing the seething atrocities
making it more than ones self
poles descending from the heavens
mixing textures as a star is born
never in my life, in my waking dream
did i see the agony and beauty of the fallen
like i did the day you pulled me right under
pure unmanifest consciousness
meditating in a formless pool of light
then karma ripens with its power
the substance of a manifested universe
shooting up through the earth
she aspires for life
shooting down from the heavens
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Post by kailen on Fri Aug 24, 2012 12:38 am

That's quiet beautiful love the start.
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Post by infinitereality on Fri Aug 24, 2012 3:46 am

thank you
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Post by kiran on Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:48 am

It's really beautiful... Some parts that I liked and made me think are:

"never in my life, in my waking dream
did i see the agony and beauty of the fallen
like i did the day you pulled me right under"

"Overflowing with Light
Expanding Dimensions" this made me wonder how much of the world we really see and understand...

"she aspires for life
shooting down from the heavens"

very beautiful poem *hug*
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Post by infinitereality on Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:34 am

****hug****** thank you
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Post by kiran on Fri Aug 24, 2012 8:01 am

you are welcome!! Have a beautiful day!! I love you
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