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Who Could Ever Say Which?

Post by Blacksatin773 on Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:29 pm

A poem I wrote for my cousin Katie. Smile Not the best, but I still kinda like it.

Who could ever say which?

Dark shadows, which colour every night,
And paint surfaces deeper than they should.
Sun writes it gold, and bleeds its yellow light,
Shooting its arrows of heat like Robin Hood.

I like both night and day so much with their
Ongoing fight of which side may stay high;
The moon or sun, both are always so fair,
They push their way up, then fall with a sigh.

To choose between the two, is much too hard.
The day or night, who could ever say which?
Both are so pretty, subjects of a bard.
Colours so vibrant, eternally rich.

I say pick sunset, where sun is not gone,
And starry night will still lie just beyond.
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Post by Aduhm on Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:34 pm

AWESOME!! great poem, it really paints a picture!
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Post by Blacksatin773 on Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:36 pm

Thank you Smile
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Post by Aduhm on Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:43 pm

no problem! and i saw you're from Florida, me too! i didn't know there were really any other moon children here!
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Post by Blacksatin773 on Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:11 pm

Yeah, I don't see any around where I live. I kind of just found the moonchildren by chance. Smile Thankfully. Actually, most people around here seem to even dress the same... Odd. Shocked Lol
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Post by Natt on Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:07 am

I like it <3
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Post by Blacksatin773 on Thu Apr 19, 2012 7:44 pm

Thank you. Smile
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Post by YetiMoonchild on Mon Oct 29, 2012 3:32 pm

Beautifulllll Like a Star @ heaven sunny
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