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Post by TheLastSongbird on Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:30 pm

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Competition Entry

For my entry to this competition, I was influenced by my recent experience of having to be brave and brutally honest in order to do the most loving thing, and being thankful for having everything turn out alright in the end. I was also inspired by sylphs, and the way they take thoughts to the Universe. I find it very comforting and uplifting to be able to see these creatures, and to know that every positive and loving thought we have somehow manifests in our lives.

Sylph

Each of my thoughts
Gives you hands like mine,
Unborn children of the air.
As each touch of human joy,
Sorrow or regret
Leads you to creation,
Let my steps
Leave my Love
In their ghosts.

You recognised
My honesty and courage.
Threading back
My heart's other half,
You stem the bleed of guilt.
I'm learning to believe
That my decisions have been just
And the Universe will heal
The wounds that I have left.

In the mist
By candlelight
Beneath a mystic dome of blue,
I know the way you dance
As you wait to catch a wish
Of pure or dark intentions.
I imagine that you gather silver threads
From my tears
As they fall from me,
In awe of this discovery of completion.

Now, with the choice,
I wouldn't leave the woodland
The rivers or the reservoirs
Of my home.
Within each soul
I've hurt or healed,
A part of me belongs.

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Post by Aduhm on Mon Mar 26, 2012 6:02 pm

GREAT JOB!! your poem about sylphs is awesome!!!!!
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Post by Natt on Wed Mar 28, 2012 1:35 am

Honey, this is so great <3
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Post by PinkBarrierLou on Wed Mar 28, 2012 5:38 am

Just beautifull congrats Very Happy
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Post by TheLastSongbird on Wed Mar 28, 2012 11:35 am

Aww, thankyou guys, I'm so glad you like my poem Very Happy

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Post by out of the hollow on Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:24 am

Love it! Great poem and great idea <3
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Post by mile86 on Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:57 am

Liz you are awesome once more, and your poem is excellent!
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