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Eden

Post by kailen on Sat Feb 04, 2012 3:10 am

I have Remembered
What the time Forgets
Recalled By Mind
The Stars Spun wide
With Moons Reflex
My Mind was still
Pitch Shifts colours Fade
Visions Unfold Paused Breath...

Shadows of Man and Tree side by side
With lights scar between.

Figures Dance beautifully taunting between
careful not to fall as if they would break
into shards of sound that would
fall beneath this absent sky.

All this time i had not witnessed this
Delayed by a life of wasted array.

The world before Madness set in.

Calm travelled in the air and all fell still
The figures retreated from where they came
except one who crept towards
taking a silhouetted hand.
The tree beside started to fade
as did they until nothing remained
and there place was no longer here.

They Had Awoken.

P.O.D Kailen 2012





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Post by ChiyoLuxuria on Sat Feb 04, 2012 5:52 am

I love this. The words flow perfectly
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Post by kailen on Sat Feb 04, 2012 6:30 am

Thank you Smile
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