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Luxurious Poetry

Post by ChiyoLuxuria on Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:37 pm

I'll add more poems from time to time, but for now I just have one

Frustration

I love you so much
but you're so frustrating.
I try to help
but it's so irritating,
you're so immature,
you don't listen to anyone,
you act like a child,
if it's not easy you just run.

You call me amazing
and think my tolerance is phenomenal,
but to tell you the truth
I'm just being responsible.
I'm not perfect
and I don't do everything I should,
but I do enough for now
and I wish you would.

Things would be so much better
if you'd stop resisting.
But you think life is horrible
and you keep insisting
that things won't change
and there's nothing you can do.

The truth is nothing will change
because there's nothing you're willing to do.
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Re: Luxurious Poetry

Post by lunachild on Mon Jan 23, 2012 12:09 pm

I like it Smile Nice job and the rhythm is perfect
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Post by Krissy on Mon Jan 23, 2012 12:19 pm

cool

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Post by moonchildmaybelline on Mon Jan 23, 2012 1:39 pm

whoa really good! i love poems, i just cant write one :[ very good job!
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