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Kallis Laps

Post by Guest on Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:31 pm

I tried to write a poem in Estonian. I am still very very new to the language. So I know it is probably not all correct and I'm kind of embarrassed to put it. I'll translate it how it is supposed to be. It's about me when I was younger. I was so lost.

Palun, usu mind.
Ma ei taha sind näha langevad,
Kuid sa seisad äärel ja sa mängid mäge.

Palun, kuula mind.
Ma tean et su elu ei ole lihtne,
Aga kui sul hoida et mask näole siis te kaotate ise.

Oh Palun, kallis laps, avage oma silmad.
Vaata ennast, vaata sisse.

Oh Palun, kallis tüdruk, ei nuta.
Tean et see on vale, see elu sa elada.

Vaata ringi selles maailmas.
Olete Valinud elada pimeduses.

Hääl su peas ei lase magada, see kummitab te.
Sa paed teadma et olete kaotanud ise.

Oh Palun, kallis laps, avage oma silmad.
Vaata ennast, vaata sisse.

Oh Palun, kallis tüdruk, ei nuta.
Tean et see on vale, see elu sa elada.





Please, believe me.
I don't want to see you fall,
but you're standing on the edge and you are playing games.

Please, listen to me.
I know you're life has not been easy
but if you keep that mask on your face, you'll lose yourself.

Oh please, dear child, open your eyes.
look at yourself, look inside.

Oh please, dear girl, don't cry.
I know it is a lie, this life you're living.

Look around you at this world.
You have chosen to live in darkness.

The voice in your head won't let you sleep, it haunts you,
you have to know that you've lost yourself.

Oh please, dear child, open your eyes.
look at yourself, look inside.

Oh please, dear girl, don't cry.
I know it is a lie, this life you're living.


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Post by Natt on Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:49 am

honey, I love it so much. Reaaaaalllly!!!! It's so wonderful. I feel every your words inside me
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Post by Natt on Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:53 am

awww try send it to Fan Friday Smile
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Post by Guest on Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:08 am

haha I am to embarrassed to show it for Kerli. I know my Estonian is not good.

Thank you Natt. You are so sweet to me Smile Smile

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Post by Natt on Sat Nov 05, 2011 3:05 pm

don't be... you shouldn't . It's wonderful that you try write in Estonian

You're welcome honey <3
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Post by moonchild_amarah on Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:11 am

I'm learning estonian,too and it's so amazing how good u are,already as u said u're new to the language (:
Thumbs up!
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Post by Guest on Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:58 pm

well some words I did not know so I had to use a translator. This is actually wrong in some parts. I got help from a native speaker Wink

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Post by moonchild_amarah on Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:51 am

ooh,lahe,tegelikult ma paranesin mu keelt nüüd:] ma õpin väga palju ja kirjutan eestlasedega,mis aitas väga hea..
su teksti on päris kaunis ja sa pead rohkem kirjutama:)
ilusat päeva,süüüüüüüüdad♥
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Post by moonchild_amarah on Thu Nov 08, 2012 7:26 am

haha,kui halvasti eesti keelt kirjutasin Very Happy Very Happy
Aga ikka veel see luuletus mulle meeldibki Smile
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