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Post by kailen on Sat Sep 18, 2010 2:47 am

Have you ever watched the plants grow
or placed angel shapes in ancient snow

listened to hear a voice of unveiled beauty
how those things changed my path

We all grew together in seperate homes at different times
while some learned to fit in while others learned to drop out

Broken mirrors once hid behind faces now pasted
we see no humanity now just bad luck and greed

Are we ashamed to conform too our destiny
to believe in something

i didnt feel i could smile once i'd realised the journey ahead
a life of stress against the youthful mind pasted and left behind

But when we grow we mature to see time is true
no sundialed quest was needed my eyes now tell the world

Lines cut from learning curves as jagged as the rocks cold beneath our feet
The wear begin to appear from precious moments lost quicker than the lightning in the sky

How has my face has changed from being the son
and how has yours from being the daughter

How many candles have been lit to show us the way
and how many tears are lost today

P.O.D 2010









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Post by electric_rhino on Sat Sep 18, 2010 11:16 am

it's beautiful. And sad, but beautiful!
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Post by Natt on Sat Sep 18, 2010 12:24 pm

I love your poem. What was now your inspiration? Your mind is interesting Smile
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Post by pixiedust19 on Sat Sep 18, 2010 12:32 pm

beautiful(: <3 it.

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Post by kailen on Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:10 am

KerliKoivPoland wrote:I love your poem. What was now your inspiration? Your mind is interesting Smile

Frist thank you its nice to know people find my poems readable maybe even beautiful

This is one of my best i think i wanted people to think of time and challenge some of there perceptions i will try not to yabble on to much and try to explain some of the meanings hope it does not ruin the poem though-

Broken mirrors once hid behind faces now pasted
we see no humanity now just bad luck and greed


This meant that what if mirrors form a soul from all the people that would have gaze into them
but when they become broken or cracked through age they are considered worthless and bad luck only to replaced through the want for a perfect replacement cause the humanity is lost and forgotten this sadly happens with people too (Hope your still on my wave length Lol)

People hide behind other people (and get discarded sometimes thats a truth to me from my experience)
i also relate this to the way society works as its ages the cracks and loss of humanity start to show
and the cost Bad Times (luck) and greed
but why dont we replace that it seems only people get replaced
and they live with the consequences.

its a sad way of seeing things i burden myself with this mind sometimes

and if a mirror could remember all the people and their souls that have stood before them now thats magical
is it fair to say that we make eye contact with them but only notice ourselfs (not the person years ago that may of stood it the same position as us this includes ourselfs) its the way we see things maybe we should reflect more

WE MISS ALOT OF THE MAGIC IN LIFE IN FORGETTING THAT THE PAST IS OUR PAST


I could prob write many explainations about this poem but this line may be the saddest in this poem


How many candles have been lit to show us the way
and how many tears are lost today


all the burned out candles are forgotten like the people who held them
or the candles could be metaphor (knowledge is gained in light then lost in tears -ones death Crying or Very sad )

Anyhow on a lighter note lol

hope you like my work i gave you a glimspe into my mind with it
so i hope it inspires

xoxox take care xoxox
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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 on Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:50 pm

gawsh you're mind is so... intimidating! lol i mean that in a good way, of course. you are a very inspirational person yourself with brilliant ideas and ways of explaining things that can easily escape me but once i begin to grasp your meaning, it's like "wow. i never thought of it that way." and i become hooked on your every word. very mesmerizing.

i'm a fan! <3
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Re: Words i wanted you to hear

Post by Natt on Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:09 pm

kailen wrote:
KerliKoivPoland wrote:I love your poem. What was now your inspiration? Your mind is interesting Smile

Frist thank you its nice to know people find my poems readable maybe even beautiful

This is one of my best i think i wanted people to think of time and challenge some of there perceptions i will try not to yabble on to much and try to explain some of the meanings hope it does not ruin the poem though-

Broken mirrors once hid behind faces now pasted
we see no humanity now just bad luck and greed


This meant that what if mirrors form a soul from all the people that would have gaze into them
but when they become broken or cracked through age they are considered worthless and bad luck only to replaced through the want for a perfect replacement cause the humanity is lost and forgotten this sadly happens with people too (Hope your still on my wave length Lol)

People hide behind other people (and get discarded sometimes thats a truth to me from my experience)
i also relate this to the way society works as its ages the cracks and loss of humanity start to show
and the cost Bad Times (luck) and greed
but why dont we replace that it seems only people get replaced
and they live with the consequences.

its a sad way of seeing things i burden myself with this mind sometimes

and if a mirror could remember all the people and their souls that have stood before them now thats magical
is it fair to say that we make eye contact with them but only notice ourselfs (not the person years ago that may of stood it the same position as us this includes ourselfs) its the way we see things maybe we should reflect more

WE MISS ALOT OF THE MAGIC IN LIFE IN FORGETTING THAT THE PAST IS OUR PAST


I could prob write many explainations about this poem but this line may be the saddest in this poem


How many candles have been lit to show us the way
and how many tears are lost today


all the burned out candles are forgotten like the people who held them
or the candles could be metaphor (knowledge is gained in light then lost in tears -ones death Crying or Very sad )

Anyhow on a lighter note lol

hope you like my work i gave you a glimspe into my mind with it
so i hope it inspires

xoxox take care xoxox
I'm sorry that now I write it but now I am here :)Wow your words are very important. Your soul must be gold and unique. Good Luck. Thanks
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Re: Words i wanted you to hear

Post by Guest on Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:40 am

thats nice.

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Re: Words i wanted you to hear

Post by kailen on Sat Feb 04, 2012 3:33 am

My soul is open too my kin

God bless
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