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Post by Claudia on Fri Sep 10, 2010 10:55 pm

You promised a childish promise.
We will die together, by each other side.
We are welcomed into this world together, into the arms of our mother.
Promise me to never leave without me?

A minute, an hour, a day.
Time flies by when we have fun.
We believe it won’t end; the joy we share will never end.
But someday, it will.

When big brother left us I was sad.
Yes we were younglings, but I understood.
He doesn’t want to see our faces ever again.
You won’t leave me, you made a promise.
And you stuck to that, for awhile.

Life is a cruel joke.
It breaks my heart to see you suffer.
Struggling through your final days.
I could only stand and watch you with tear filled eyes.
You pledge to never leave me, but you are.
Your time is ticking away, each day felt like a heavy burden.
Please, please don’t go.

Our strong bond has weakened, but I can still feel your pain.
It hurts you to speak, but I know what you wanted to say.
To say sorry in silent words.
But I don’t have the courage to forgive.

Your days are numbered.
Passing away with your frail hands in mine.
I watch as you slip into an eternal sleep.
A single tear trail down my cheek.
I kiss you on the forehead goodbye
Then the realization hit.

You’re not here anymore
To help me up when I fall.
To dry my tears.
To make me laugh.
You’re gone, forever.

It hurts, the empty feeling is painful.
You made a promise, but you lied.
And I never forgave you.
Being swallowed alive by guilt is too much.

But you’re here still.
Even though our soul is ripped apart.
I can still feel you,
A little piece lingers in my heart.

As new tears fall
I learn to forgive every lie.
Every fight and argument.
Even if you’re not physically here.
You’re with me, through the good and bad.

You broke a promise, and I forgive you.
And let me promise to you.
Never let this Unity go.


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It's long and up until "life is a cruel joke is kinda about my life and growing up with a twin brother by my side. From then on about the whole dying bit would be a nightmare to me. Enjoy.

(Apparently my name is too short for the title so I added entry Razz )
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 3:50 am

it was awsome Smile
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Post by Claudia on Sat Sep 11, 2010 3:53 am

Thanks, so is yours :]

If you keep up on the poetry you will improve, I can see a talent in you.
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Post by TheBlueJayStar on Sat Sep 11, 2010 7:59 am

that was so beautiful. gosh. i cant describe how much i love this.
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Post by Claudia on Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:08 am

aww thanks Jay! :]
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Post by Guest on Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:10 am

well done

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Post by Claudia on Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:11 am

Thank you :]
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Post by Poetic on Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:38 am

This had me in tears. Not only is this so emotional, but it's so easy to relate to. Thank you so much.
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Post by Claudia on Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:40 am

Your welcome :]

and I think it's a great why to remember the 9/11 victims by posting this on the day.
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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 on Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:38 pm

gahhh the emotion in this sends chills down my spine!!
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:05 pm

Claudia wrote:Thanks, so is yours :]

If you keep up on the poetry you will improve, I can see a talent in you.


wow...thanks that means alot coming from some one as talented as you!!! Very Happy thanks I love you
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Post by Claudia on Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:13 pm

Your welcome :] everyone here is so talented.
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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 on Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:20 pm

Claudia wrote:Your welcome :] everyone here is so talented.

maaan kerli's music attracts the most unique, beautiful people and brings them together as moon children... freakin' awesome.
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Post by pixiedust19 on Sun Sep 12, 2010 10:03 am

this poem almost put me to tears(':
<3 it.

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Post by Claudia on Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:49 pm

Aww it had a few people close to tears or already in tears ;^_^

It is very emotional poem I am guessing?
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sun Sep 12, 2010 10:04 pm

yesh!! Very Happy
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Post by Natt on Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:40 pm

your poem have very big emotion. I love it
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Post by Claudia on Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:37 am

Thank you :]
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Post by Natt on Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:35 am

You're welcome
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