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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:05 pm

im going to do a poem on a unity/love...hope you like it ive never done anything like this...


i tell you the truth
but you dont care
ive done nothing wrong
but you dont care
im truthfull and honest and caring
and you are hateful,disrespectful,and rude
ill tell you anything you want to know
but you dont belive me
i believe you when you lie!
why dont you believe me when i tell the truth!
i love you with all my heart..i do
but you hate me with all your soul
truth and love is my shield
hate and darknes
are yours
why do i bother?
why do i tell you all my problems
show you all my scars
when you just laugh and taunt me!
i know you
you know me
but that doesnt stop you
truth is me love is my light when its dark...and the stars our mine to share
our my protection along wiht father sky
and hate is you
darkness is what your heart is
for you dont care
or never will you!
but i do
i care for you
ill nurture you
ill help you in your darkest hour
what will you do?
i tell you the truth
ive done nothing to hurt you
ive always loved you
but my heart means nothing to you
in my eyes...ill always be there for you
even when you push me away
so ill love you for ever till your last breath and one day
one night
under the stars and the moon
with father sky watching us
you will learn that love is there
love is always there when you need it
it always will be
and always has been
so come into the light with me!
enjoy the warmth and love of others
and stop bieng alone there is no need join me and youll always know...
LOVE IS ALWAYS THERE!!!!



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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:05 pm

i suck Idea but i tried X3
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Post by PROUDLIKECOW on Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:23 pm

Yeah, you suck at telling lies alright! This poem is absolutely fantabulicious! You obviously didn't try to write this, it just permeated out of your soul in the form of words!
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Thu Sep 09, 2010 2:40 am

wow Shocked thanks! i was pretty mad when i wrote it..so thanks Very Happy
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Post by Krissy on Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:47 am

wow..That just describes my friendship with my ex friend..no jokes...that was really good..

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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Thu Sep 09, 2010 12:17 pm

thanks not i just have to send in a cover letter thank you Smile
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Post by Krissy on Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:27 am

yw!! yeah!..That's what you have to do.

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Post by cg360 on Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:32 am

Awesome Very Happy

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Post by Guest on Fri Sep 10, 2010 7:44 am

wish you very much good luck to you! That is very awesome.So true! Think you could be the few who could win this thing.

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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:45 pm

wow thanks Very Happy you guys are awsome but it wont let me on the thingy to post my cover letter T.T il have ot do it later :S
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Post by YetiMoonchild on Fri Sep 10, 2010 3:47 pm

It was beautiful! The lyrics, it really is like something I'm in >.< Good job!
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:39 pm

Very Happy thanks Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:57 pm

im happy you guys like it i thought it wasnt really all that good but thats just me i always need someone to tell me im good or whats wrong with it Smile
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Post by TheBlueJayStar on Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:57 pm

i like it! lots of people like that. Sad
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:00 pm

yeah Sad thanks i just wish my computer would stop bieng so idiotic -.-
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:38 pm

thanks for the positive post Very Happy it means the world!!
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:05 am

found out why it wont let me Smile
grr...
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:09 am

yay!!! i can send it in now Very Happy!!!!! eeeeeee hope i win but good luck to everyone else!!!
(good luck peepes hope i win but if i dont its ok there is alot more on the way hopefully Very Happy)
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Post by kailen on Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:32 am

Your soul shines through your work
so dont worry about your dark days
keep your chin up
Stand tall and no matter what
keep smiling the world needs more people like yourself from reading your work

Good job *



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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:35 am

Smile awwwwwwwww thank you so much!!! ive added i bit more that will make it just a bit better Smile
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:22 pm

Very Happy <---- looks evil o.0
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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 on Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:07 pm

this was obviously really heartfelt and you must have put a lot of effort into this which really paid off because it's absolutely beautiful Smile well done
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:09 pm

thanks Very Happy i lvoe your songs/poems you make!!!
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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 on Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:13 pm

wow thank you Smile i look forward to reading more of your work!
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:16 pm

thanks idk if ill make more though....
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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 on Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:24 pm

aww you must you must you must x3
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 7:25 pm

mabey ive beent hinking about something to write..but idk....i dont think im that good but practice makes perfect...right??
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Post by pixiedust19 on Sun Sep 12, 2010 10:07 am

its awesome(:
i would like to see more poems from you(:
<333

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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sun Sep 12, 2010 10:27 am

<3333 thanks guys!! Very Happy some one made me mad but it was because he said something about beauty and i was like "what happend to beaty on the inside??" so yeah..im stil thinking..
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Sun Sep 12, 2010 12:41 pm

cant wait for the results >_
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Mon Sep 13, 2010 5:11 pm

Very Happy the rusults are due in...2 days right!! *passes out* yay!
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Post by Natt on Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:29 pm

Now, I very like your poeam. Your words are cool
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Post by Loveisalwaysthere! on Wed Sep 15, 2010 2:40 pm

Shocked thanks Smile
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Post by OllieAburame on Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:42 pm

I love, love LOVE your poem~ Its way better then mine : P
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